Dao Ascension

I've played the update, the story still have many typo and often mispronounced MC's gender, like I take Female MC and often she's referred as He. 

The fighting the underground arena no matter what you choose it seems the game always think you murder the guy, (I choose to offer him surrender, but he doesn't want to so I need to force him to surrender). 

While he seems like a bad person from how the story introducing him, he doesn't do anything bad with my MC, it's humiliating enough losses though....  Hope he learn his lesson. 

I notice a great many people being incredibly vague and pussyfooting around the truth in an effort to be polite. The short version of this is, this is... terrible. The premise might not be but the execution is. I get the sense that the author is not a native English speaker, which is fine, but they might wish to write it in their native language and then translate it or have it translated. I couldn't get past more than a few screens before it grated on my nerves so badly I could not continue.  The prose is perfunctory at best and nonsensical at worst, and lacks any descriptions to speak of. This is an IF. You are painting a picture with words, you're not even giving us the line art. Perhaps the author should go back and do an outline of this and then try writing it when they are more experienced writing this kind of narrative.  The passion for the subject is there, the desire seems to be. In fact I think that's why it's the way it is, the author was so excited to do this, they jumped the gun before they were equipped to. So please, don't give up but go equip yourself to give your audience what you and they deserve, because this does a disservice to both. 

This is interesting story, I get a good laugh out of it like act as some sort of bumbling idiot even being OP as hell, I like how you wrote the table has been turned on them.

But.....  I think this could use some more description you know like cooking tiger not just written as  cooking and eating maybe you could describe the process itself like skinning the tiger, then cut the best part ( maybe ribs, shanks, whatever) leave the dirty organs or describe something like Tiger Liver have especially good quality, like how it was cooked? Is it Stirred? Roast? Grilled or maybe steamed? There is a way to make cooking something as part of lore dumping like what seasoning they use? Is there any fancy herbs? Maybe unique sauce? 

There is also mention of forest should take some time to describe how the forest looks like, any bioluminescent plants? What kind of tree there is? Crooked trees or maybe vines sprawl?

 Also like the cultivation school, how's the school looks like? White pagoda, large courtyard, massive gate, with thousands of staircase in the mountains or like floating island? 

there is also part like person, should describe what they look like, like skin color, face features of there is any, how tall they are, how broad, how their body looks like? Lanky, Stout, athletic, fit, etc, like our sister probably could be described how she grow up to be? How tall? What's the difference now and back then?  Roulan is beautiful ofc but what kind of beauty? Innocent? Natural? Sharp? Or maybe cute beauty?  Did she blushed, stutter or maybe if you're writing for adults could also describe her bust? Is it large or average or small?  Describing more of the character in detail will make reader care about such character, like Roulan mother I understand she's kind person a healer but what else, maybe she bake snack for MC? Small little things like that will invoke emotion from the reader and make reader more and more sympathetic towards her, while some would see this as railroading it is in a good way railroading. 

Take more time to describe, ofc it could be filled with reader imagination, telling stories is like creation.... Show us reader how vibrant and wonderful this world you're building, I understand the fast pace probably because MC still a child, it maybe limiting but still in my opinion a bit more description/narration would make the story bloom.